What is the answer to imperfections in our system
it is because she did not understand love and emotion, only jonas had gained that because of the giver.
to make any plain sentence like the one given more "dazzling", the first thing that comes to mind is perhaps using stronger adjectives that call attention to an otherwise dull action such as a person walking down the street. also we could reveal some detail about the character or what she's feeling or thinking in order to embed the sentence with more meaning. i'll give you an example:
sandra found herself profoundly submerged in the tediousness of her routine as she started walking across the street, without noticing the red light.
hope this !
should be birds eye view at least i think tell me if i am wrong though..
it is a mnemonic device because it is used to you remember something